
一、教學(xué)目標(biāo):1. 體會(huì)燕子過(guò)海的艱辛和艱難,懂得要愛(ài)護(hù)益鳥燕子。2. 運(yùn)用前兩課學(xué)到的理解句子意思的方法,讀懂描寫燕子過(guò)海不怕辛苦、艱難和寫水手們對(duì)待蒸子的態(tài)度的句子。3. 能有感情地朗讀課文。二、教學(xué)重點(diǎn)和難點(diǎn):理解課文中描寫燕子過(guò)海時(shí)非常辛苦、艱難的句子。三、教學(xué)過(guò)程:(一)啟發(fā)談話,揭題。同學(xué)們,你們見(jiàn)過(guò)燕子嗎?請(qǐng)你向大家介紹一下燕子,好嗎?(燕子是益鳥。燕子是候鳥。燕子的羽毛是黑色的,燕子的尾巴像剪刀。)你們說(shuō)得真不錯(cuò),誰(shuí)能告訴我,燕子大概有多大?(學(xué)生用手比劃)那么,誰(shuí)見(jiàn)過(guò)海?海有多大?(海很大,天連水,水連天,望也望不到邊。)誰(shuí)能用一個(gè)詞說(shuō)說(shuō)“天連水,水連天”的意思?(一望無(wú)邊、一望無(wú)際、無(wú)邊無(wú)際)誰(shuí)能用手比劃一下海有多大?確實(shí)比不出,這么小的燕子,要過(guò)天連水,水連天,一望無(wú)際的大??烧媪瞬黄穑∧銈兛匆?jiàn)過(guò)燕子過(guò)海嗎?有一艘軍艦上的海軍戰(zhàn)士看見(jiàn)了過(guò)海的燕子,于是他們給我們寫下了這篇文章《燕子過(guò)?!?。教師范讀(二)學(xué)生質(zhì)疑。讀了這篇課文你有什么問(wèn)題呢?(燕子為什么要過(guò)海?為什么它要不分晝夜地飛?為什么像雨點(diǎn)一樣落下來(lái)?)

Teaching Goal:1. General aims:Talk about recent past events2. Particular aims:A. Language Focus.Talk about recent past events and think of the past events.B. Language goalsHow was….?It was …What did …do over the weekend?C. Language structures:(1). How was your weekend? I was great. Pay attention to no form.(2). What did you do over the weekend? I played soccer. We went to the beach.D. Useful words and phrases:Words: was, did, went, beach, over, project, test, wasn’t, false, number, geography, spend, week, most, mixture, their, had, little, cook, read, saw, change, everyone, sit, sat, no, anythingPhrases: did one’s homework, played soccer, cleaned my room, went to the beach, played tennis, went to the movies, on Saturday morning, over the weekend, cook … for, what about, do some reading, have a party, talk show, go shoppingE. Grammar language:Present simple past tenseRegular and irregular verbsF. Learning strategies:Tour and holidaysG. Interdiscipinary:H. Emotion and manner:Teaching time: 5 periodsTeaching procedures:Period One教學(xué)步驟、時(shí)間 教師活動(dòng) 學(xué)生活動(dòng) 媒體應(yīng)用Step 1Free talk 3’ Ask some questions like:Who’s on duty today?What’s the weather like? Answer and talk about something.讓同學(xué)們回答下列問(wèn)題1. Do you like weekend? (Let some students answer)It takes them three minutes to talk about the question.2. Why do you like weekend? (let the students answer) Most of the students like the weekend此時(shí)教師用漢語(yǔ)問(wèn):“在周末期間問(wèn)你干了什么?這句話用英語(yǔ)這么回答?Let the students guess.At last the teacher give them right answer3. What did you do over the weekend?(板書、學(xué)習(xí))

所需要用到的句子:Who is that?That is Jack. I like him.Why do you like him?I like him because he is interesting.Task 4: 設(shè)計(jì)理想中的人類Step one: 設(shè)計(jì)理想中的人類的外貌。把全班同學(xué)分成若干小組,學(xué)生可以邊說(shuō)邊在紙上畫出他們的模樣。Step two: 設(shè)計(jì)理想中人類的性格。學(xué)生們可以把那些能描述性格的單詞寫在圖畫的旁邊。Step three: 每組選出一名同學(xué),其他同組同學(xué)提問(wèn),他作簡(jiǎn)單回答,并說(shuō)明原因。所需用到的句子:What does he or she look like?He or she ...What is he or she like?He or she is ...Why?Because ...Task 5: 挑戰(zhàn)性活動(dòng)調(diào)查性格是天生的還是后天形成的,讓每個(gè)同學(xué)回家去調(diào)查一下自己成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中性格是否有變化,具體是怎樣的,為什么會(huì)這樣? Teaching Aims:1. Enable students to have a general understanding of how to talk about people's physical appearance.2. Enable students to tackle some essential vocabularies and patterns about describing people. Provide them with necessary skills and methods.3. Create various chances for students to describe the persons they're familiar with, such as classmates, family members, teachers, idols, etc.

Don’t fight. =You can’t fight. (板書,教讀)教師把這些句子板書在黑板上,并請(qǐng)學(xué)生大聲整齊地讀祈使句和“can’t”句型,并讓學(xué)生注意兩種句型表達(dá)形式的不同和轉(zhuǎn)換,“Don’t …=You can’t…”;并對(duì)學(xué)生說(shuō):These are our school rules. (板書,教讀) You can’t break the school rules. Don’t break the school rules.(板書,教讀)步驟3 :Practicea. T: Now, each of the students is breaking one of these rules.Please finish 1a.學(xué)生看圖,完成1a的內(nèi)容,檢查答案并大聲朗讀校規(guī)。b. 聽(tīng)錄音,完成1b,選出四位學(xué)生都違反了哪條校規(guī);聽(tīng)之前,學(xué)生要讀會(huì)英文名。c. 請(qǐng)兩位學(xué)生朗讀1c部分的句型;要求學(xué)生兩人一組對(duì)話表演,SA扮演外校轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)新生,SB告知本校校規(guī)。(學(xué)生可經(jīng)過(guò)討論,多說(shuō)出他們想到的校規(guī),不必只限于書上;教師應(yīng)給予幫助)2) 第二課時(shí)(2a~4)步驟1 :warming up of revisionT: What are the rules at your school?學(xué)生使用“can”或祈使句表達(dá)各條校規(guī);其中老師可引出“eat in the cafeteria outside”的表達(dá)。步驟2 :Practicea.T: Christina is an exchange student. She doesn’t know the rules. Let’s listen, what activities they’re talking about?學(xué)生聽(tīng)第一遍時(shí),完成2a;第二遍時(shí),完成2b;b. 請(qǐng)學(xué)生領(lǐng)讀2c部分,看著2a完成的表格,理解2c活動(dòng)的要求;分成小組針對(duì)2a進(jìn)行問(wèn)答;

三、教學(xué)建議第一課時(shí):1. Lead in (Vocabulary)A) Before class, teacher should collect some pictures of working places. For example: Bank, TV Station, Restaurant, Police Station, Hospital ...B) In class, show students the pictures (PowerPoint, OHP). Ask students to tell the name of the working places and the name of the jobs.Shop assistant, doctor, actor, reporter, police office, waiter, bank clerk, studentC) Do exercise 1a and 3a.2. Bingo GameAsk groups of students to make up pairs of cards with a job on one and the related workplace on the other. For example, waiter / restaurant, teacher / school, doctor / hospital. Encourage students to use both the job / workplace combinations in the book and the ones that students came up during class discussions. Be sure they have twice as many sets of cards as there are students in the group. They can make two sets of cards for a single job / workplace, if necessary. Then have each group mix up its set of cards and hand their cards out in random order. Each time a student gets a pair of cards that match, he or she can lay these cards down. The goal is to have no cards in your hand at the end.3. Task OneA) Ask students to work in pairs and ask the partner what does he / she want to be in the future.e. g. :What do you / does he / does she want to be?I want to be a.Why?Because it's (adj).B) Vocabulary: Section B, 1a4. Homework 1.2.

1 Each group choose one place to describe and what you are doing in it Choose one place, and describe what they are doing 2 Move around the room and give suggestions Talk about it and write it down 3 Ask one to show their works and act it Choose one of each group to make a report 4 Evaluate the best group and the best reporter Choose the best one Homework Ask your friends their ideal place and write about it教學(xué)反思:新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)生在課堂中的主體地位,在綜合課中他們的主體地位就更加突出。在各個(gè)活動(dòng)中給不同程度的學(xué)生不同層次的任務(wù),讓各層面的學(xué)生都有表現(xiàn)發(fā)揮的機(jī)會(huì),從而產(chǎn)生對(duì)英語(yǔ)的興趣。使用照片圖片多媒體來(lái)輔助教學(xué),效果更好。同時(shí)讓了解其他國(guó)家風(fēng)景,風(fēng)俗的同學(xué)介紹ideal place,增加學(xué)生的背景知知識(shí),實(shí)現(xiàn)跨學(xué)科交流的目的。教案點(diǎn)評(píng):采用任務(wù)型教學(xué)模式,在各個(gè)活動(dòng)中給不同程度的學(xué)生不同層次的任務(wù),讓各層面的學(xué)生都有表現(xiàn)發(fā)揮的機(jī)會(huì),從而產(chǎn)生對(duì)英語(yǔ)的興趣。使用照片圖片多媒體來(lái)輔助教學(xué),效果更好。讓了解其他國(guó)家風(fēng)景,風(fēng)俗的同學(xué)介紹ideal place,增加學(xué)生的背景知識(shí),實(shí)現(xiàn)跨學(xué)科交流的目的。

五、教學(xué)Section B-2c1. Pair work: What do you think of the belt/sunglasses/…? What does your father/mother/… think of your scarf/belt…?2. Group work(1). Teacher shows some different kinds of school uniforms (制服)and asks : “ What do you think of your school uniforms? If you have a chance to choose your school uniforms, what kind would you like to choose?”(2). Discuss in groups.(3).Get some Ss to report in class.說(shuō)明:這一步旨在讓學(xué)生運(yùn)用已有的語(yǔ)言知識(shí)談?wù)搶?duì)事物的看法和意見(jiàn),并簡(jiǎn)單闡明理由,培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的主動(dòng)思維能力和運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)的能力。六、教學(xué)拓展調(diào)查電視節(jié)目的收視率任務(wù):調(diào)查你周圍的人對(duì)現(xiàn)在各種電視節(jié)目的反響?;顒?dòng)過(guò)程:1.教師布置任務(wù),讓學(xué)生調(diào)查周圍的人(包括他的親戚朋友和鄰居)喜歡收看哪方面的電視節(jié)目。2.學(xué)生進(jìn)行調(diào)查活動(dòng),運(yùn)用本單元所學(xué)的句型What do you think of….? (Why?)What's your favorite game shows?What do you think of talk show?I doesn’t mind it.I like it.I love it.I can’t stand it.3.記錄下排在前10位的TV Program,填寫調(diào)查表,比較其收視率。

單元整體說(shuō)明(一)單元教材分析本單元的核心話題是描述動(dòng)物和表達(dá)個(gè)人喜好,以及句式why do you like…? Because…。這也是本單元的教學(xué)重點(diǎn)。通過(guò)本單元的學(xué)習(xí),學(xué)生應(yīng)能較流利地運(yùn)用所學(xué)詞匯和句型描述動(dòng)物,表達(dá)個(gè)人喜好。(二)單元知識(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)1.詞匯動(dòng)物名稱 tiger, elephant, koala, dolphin, etc.詞匯描述性形容詞: smart, cute, ugly, clever, shy, etc.國(guó)家名: Australia, South Africa2.句型Why do you like koala hears? Because they are cute.Where are pandas from? They're from China.What animals do you like? I like dolphins.(三)單元整體目標(biāo)1.Master the vocabulary2.Master and use: Why do you like koalas? Because they am cute.Where are pandas from? They're from China.What animals do you like? I like dolphins.(四)單元教學(xué)重難點(diǎn)一覽(五)單元學(xué)情分析學(xué)生此前已經(jīng)學(xué)過(guò)由why, where, what 引導(dǎo)的特殊疑問(wèn)句句型,具有了學(xué)習(xí)本單元知識(shí)的認(rèn)知前提。形形色色的動(dòng)物能激發(fā)學(xué)生的好奇心,產(chǎn)生了解它們的欲望,這有利于本單元知識(shí)的教學(xué)和學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)興趣的培養(yǎng)。

(1)Have you ever been to …? Yes, I have. / Yes, I have ever been to …No, I haven’t. / No, I have never been to …(2)When did you go there? I went there last year. (3)I have never been to a water park. Neither have I. I have ever been to an amusement park. So have I. (4)How long have you been studying English? I’ve been studying English since nine o’clock. I’ve been studying English since I came back home. I’ve been studying English for five hours. (5)What’s that? It’s an amusement park in Japan. I’ve never been to an amusement park like it before. It’s fun to learn another language. Let’s go tonight. Isn’t this great?space museum, amusement park, water park, South America, Peru, Holland, European culture, tour guide, flight attendant, musical instrument, more than, be from, get to, take lessons, neither, discover, graduate, change

區(qū)分賓語(yǔ)從句、定于從句和狀語(yǔ)從句賓語(yǔ)從句和狀語(yǔ)從句,都叫做主從復(fù)合句。賓語(yǔ)從句主要是中考必考的,是初中階段必掌握的從句,賓語(yǔ)從句主要是掌握三要素,所謂賓語(yǔ)從句,就是賓語(yǔ)在主從復(fù)合句當(dāng)中充當(dāng)賓語(yǔ)的一個(gè)句子,叫做賓語(yǔ)從句。主句的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞是及物動(dòng)詞,后面如果是詞或者是短語(yǔ)的話,是簡(jiǎn)單句,如果是句子的話,肯定是賓語(yǔ)從句。I know that he good at English.就是賓語(yǔ)從句,三要素,一要素是要注意連詞,連詞一共學(xué)了三類連詞,一類連詞是that口語(yǔ)當(dāng)中可以省略,就像剛才說(shuō)的那一句,I hear he is good at English.還有疑問(wèn)代詞、疑問(wèn)副詞,how where when,疑問(wèn)代詞、疑問(wèn)副詞。還有一類連詞weather是否的意思,不是狀語(yǔ)從句當(dāng)中的如果,這一定要和如果區(qū)分開(kāi),這是是否。I don't know if he interested at English。賓語(yǔ)從句要注意if是連詞。第二要素是語(yǔ)序,要用陳述舉語(yǔ)序。比如說(shuō)你家有幾口人,我們都說(shuō)How many people are there in you family?但是這是簡(jiǎn)單句,一旦說(shuō)成賓語(yǔ)從句,你可以告訴我你家有幾口人嗎?Could you tell me how many people there are in you family ?

"Hello! Welcome to English class! Introduce yourself. Meet your new classmates." That's what the teacher says. What do you say? "Oh no!" It can be difficult talking to new people. But it can be fun, and you can make friends. How do you do it? Make small talk. Small talk is polite conversation. "Wang Nan is a great pingpang player, isn't she?" "I'd love to meet her, wouldn't you?" "It's been raining a lot, hasn't it?" Tag questions are a form of polite speech. To make small talk successfully, you should know how to make them. You should also know what topics to talk about. Try to learn this unit carefully. The next time you're in English class, you'll find out. Making small talk's easy, isn't it? (“你好!歡迎你!請(qǐng)做一下自我介紹。認(rèn)識(shí)一下你的新同學(xué)?!蓖ǔT谡n上老師會(huì)這樣說(shuō)。你會(huì)說(shuō)什么呢?“噢,不!”與陌生人談話太困難了。但是這也很有意思,并且你還能交到朋友。你該怎么做呢?閑聊。閑聊指得是禮貌的對(duì)話?!巴蹰且粋€(gè)很棒的乒乓球運(yùn)動(dòng)員,不是嗎?”“我希望自己能認(rèn)識(shí)她,你呢?“今年的雨水很多,不是嗎?”反意疑問(wèn)句是一種禮貌用語(yǔ)。為了使得談話成功,你應(yīng)該知道怎樣去進(jìn)行閑聊。你還應(yīng)該知道與不同的人該談?wù)撌裁礃拥脑掝}。認(rèn)真的學(xué)習(xí)這個(gè)單元吧,下次在英語(yǔ)課上,你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)與大家展開(kāi)談話是一件很容易的事情,不信我們來(lái)試試。)

(一).知識(shí)方面: 1.培養(yǎng)學(xué)生能運(yùn)用過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)來(lái)描述、談?wù)撨^(guò)去某個(gè)時(shí)間正在發(fā)生的事情或動(dòng)作的意識(shí)和能力,能就過(guò)去某個(gè)時(shí)間正在發(fā)生的動(dòng)作做出正確的描述。 2.培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的想象力和角色扮演的合作能力。 3.培養(yǎng)學(xué)生講述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情經(jīng)過(guò)的能力。能正確運(yùn)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)來(lái)講述故事。 (二).技能方面: 1.本單元的語(yǔ)言目標(biāo)是Talk about past events and tell a story(談?wù)撨^(guò)去的時(shí)間和講述一個(gè)故事),圍繞這一目標(biāo),要涉及句型: What were you doing when the UFO arrived? ----I was sitting in the barber’s chair. The barber was cutting my hair. 因此必須學(xué)習(xí)standing、studying、cleaning、sleeping、cooking、making、eating、cutting、等表示地點(diǎn)的詞,以便為上述句型提供語(yǔ)言材料。2.學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)的有關(guān)知識(shí)。Was/were+現(xiàn)在分詞,是該時(shí)態(tài)的表達(dá)式。 3.在學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中,要區(qū)分The boy was walking down the street when the UFO landed.和While the boy was walking down the street, the UFO landed.這兩種由when和while引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句的句型結(jié)構(gòu)。注意它們的不同。

教師帶領(lǐng)學(xué)生復(fù)習(xí)有關(guān)描述寵物的詞匯,采用教師提問(wèn)學(xué)生回答的方進(jìn)行。如:T:What animals do you think would be good pets?What animals do you think would be bad pets?What do you think are good animals for a six-year-old child?然后學(xué)生進(jìn)行 pairwork 練習(xí)。Task two: 師生互動(dòng),學(xué)習(xí)探究 1、播放3a部分的錄音,引導(dǎo)學(xué)生一邊聽(tīng)錄音,一邊跟讀。2、通過(guò)聽(tīng)錄音學(xué)生回答以下問(wèn)題:Why do you think pot-bellied pigs are popular?What are the advantages and disadvantages of keeping such a pet?教師對(duì)學(xué)生的回答進(jìn)行及時(shí)點(diǎn)評(píng)。3.學(xué)習(xí)范文,學(xué)習(xí)重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ),為下步的模仿寫作提供語(yǔ)言素材。T :1. )Have you ever kept a pig as a pet?Do you like pigs? St.:No.…Why don’t you like to keep a pig? St: No.They’re too dirty and lazy(Do you know in some foreign countries like Hollyland, Australia,pigs are the most popular pet.there’s a kind of pig.(圖)it has an interesting name? it ‘s called a pot-bellied pig.) Now,let’s learn an article about this kind of interesting pet.2.)play the tapeSt.:Listen and repeat3.)show some Qs on computer(本子St.: read silently,then answerthe Qs(本子)4.)Ask ss. Close book and retell this passage.(what is a pot-bellied pig? Is it a good or bad pet? ) St.: retell it to each other“A pot –bellied pig is a popular pet now…”5.read the article together.St.:.practice reading

Step 4. Group work (4)1. Ask a pair of students to read the dialogue. Say, This activity provides speaking, listening and writing practice using the target language.2. Ask students to complete the work in groups.3. Check the answers with the whole class. 4. Explain some of the language points. Step 5. Word review (Self check 1)1. Ask students to read the words and the phrases given. 2. Fill in the blanks with proper forms of these words to complete the sentences. 3. Check the answers with the whole class. Homework:Do activity 2 on page 57 after class. Period 6Teaching aims: 1. Teach vocabulary words and the useful expressions. 2. Enable the students to learn etiquette in different culture. 3. Help the students learn how to behave politely in public places and in daily life. Teaching procedures:Step 1. RevisionHelp students to review the function of making requests through a free talk. Then lead them to the topic of etiquette. Explain the meaning of etiquette. Or, ask students to look it up in the dictionary. Step 2. Pre-reading (Section 1)1. Ask students to read the picture and make a list with their partner about how many rules of etiquette can be seen being broken.

【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】這個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)的設(shè)計(jì)是在學(xué)生掌握了學(xué)法的基礎(chǔ)上,放手讓學(xué)生自主學(xué)習(xí),從而真正做到“將課堂還給學(xué)生”。這樣的設(shè)計(jì)不僅充分激發(fā)了學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)興趣,而且更能促使學(xué)生真正掌握初步分析人物形象的方法。四、聯(lián)系實(shí)際,拓展延伸1.作者臧克家筆下的聞一多先生是一位潛心于學(xué)術(shù)研究,“做了再說(shuō),做了不說(shuō)”的學(xué)者;也是一位英勇無(wú)畏,“說(shuō)了就做,言論與行動(dòng)完全一致”的革命家。中國(guó)自古以來(lái)就重視言行一致,并把它當(dāng)成做人的準(zhǔn)則之一。請(qǐng)收集關(guān)于言和行的成語(yǔ)或名言,選取一句作為你的座右銘,并說(shuō)明理由。2.課外閱讀聞一多的《太陽(yáng)吟》《死水》《靜夜》等詩(shī)作,欣賞其藝術(shù)特色,感受其中的精神追求。

《回憶魯迅先生》(節(jié)選)是一篇典型的有較長(zhǎng)篇幅的散文。本教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)以點(diǎn)帶面,長(zhǎng)文短教,設(shè)計(jì)了這樣一個(gè)問(wèn)題:“作者在文中為魯迅先生塑造了多個(gè)身份,具體有哪些?”如此化繁為簡(jiǎn),使課堂教學(xué)脈絡(luò)清晰。學(xué)生在閱讀長(zhǎng)篇幅文章時(shí)有了抓手,就可以有條理地去思考,形成系統(tǒng)性思維,直達(dá)教學(xué)目標(biāo)。本教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)還要求學(xué)生進(jìn)行批注式閱讀,直入文本。學(xué)生圍繞“說(shuō)說(shuō)魯迅先生身上有哪些優(yōu)秀的品質(zhì)讓學(xué)生蕭紅印象深刻?”做賞析式或者評(píng)價(jià)式批注,讓學(xué)生在自讀這篇文章時(shí),將無(wú)目的閱讀變?yōu)橛行ч喿x,既提高了課堂效率,也讓學(xué)生真正做到潛入文字之中,通過(guò)關(guān)注文章細(xì)節(jié)來(lái)深入把握文本。本教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)整體上以學(xué)生自主學(xué)習(xí)為主,教師適當(dāng)引導(dǎo)。遵從“整體感知內(nèi)容—局部探究—體會(huì)情感”的一般閱讀規(guī)律,以讀為指引,讓學(xué)生在讀中感知內(nèi)容,在讀中把握人物形象,在讀中體悟情感。各環(huán)節(jié)之間環(huán)環(huán)相扣,由淺入深,層層推進(jìn)。

本環(huán)節(jié)交流的內(nèi)容側(cè)重于體驗(yàn)與心得,是建立在充分閱讀后的再創(chuàng)作,也是對(duì)小說(shuō)閱讀方法和內(nèi)容的總結(jié)性歸納和展示,需要學(xué)生有較高的閱讀理解能力。三、延伸探討《駱駝祥子》的藝術(shù)特色師:同學(xué)們,了解經(jīng)典作品的藝術(shù)魅力,然后能運(yùn)用到自己的寫作中,是何等快樂(lè)的事啊!請(qǐng)你根據(jù)自己的閱讀體驗(yàn),概括對(duì)《駱駝祥子》這部小說(shuō)藝術(shù)特色的評(píng)價(jià)。(生小組內(nèi)交流、討論,然后推薦代表在全班交流,師明確)預(yù)設(shè) (1)結(jié)構(gòu)緊密,線索分明。(2)語(yǔ)言樸實(shí)自然,生動(dòng)明快,具有鮮明的地方色彩和濃厚的生活氣息。幽默和“京味兒”語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用熟練。(3)善于運(yùn)用各種描寫方法(肖像、心理、環(huán)境描寫等)來(lái)表現(xiàn)人物的思想性格及發(fā)展變化。(4)有深厚的文化底蘊(yùn)。寫北京的生活,北京的車夫,北京種種的風(fēng)俗人情等。在炎涼的世態(tài)中揭示地方文化。

我來(lái)到書房,找到了字典,既想快點(diǎn)知曉答案,和媽媽比個(gè)勝負(fù),又想慢點(diǎn)兒,萬(wàn)一又錯(cuò)了怎么辦。我緊張地翻開(kāi)字典,找到了“偌”字的讀音。天吶,我是對(duì)的,我太開(kāi)心了?。ú蛔?:缺少動(dòng)作描寫,沒(méi)有展現(xiàn)出“我”的緊張。修改:我使勁地捏著字典,顫抖著雙手,慢慢地打開(kāi)字典。不足2:結(jié)尾缺少人物的語(yǔ)言和神態(tài)描寫,沒(méi)有展現(xiàn)出人物開(kāi)心的心理。修改:我眉飛色舞地大叫道:“天吶,我贏啦!我贏啦!”)我捧著字典,連蹦帶跳地來(lái)到媽媽面前,欣喜若狂地說(shuō):“媽媽,你想不到吧,你一個(gè)堂堂初中老師,居然敗在拼音不太好的女兒手下。哈哈,我終于報(bào)‘仇’了……”此時(shí)的我,簡(jiǎn)直比中了五百萬(wàn)還要開(kāi)心一百倍。媽媽一聽(tīng)便傻了眼,剛才那堅(jiān)定的神情已經(jīng)蕩然無(wú)存,媽媽連忙接過(guò)字典看了又看,生怕我看錯(cuò)了似的。看到字典上的讀音,媽媽啞口無(wú)言。

【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】從詩(shī)意的語(yǔ)言入手,引導(dǎo)學(xué)生關(guān)注句式節(jié)奏、抒情性、敘事性、哲理性,品析語(yǔ)言,從而加深對(duì)文本的理解,體會(huì)作者對(duì)麗江的熱愛(ài)、贊美之情,體會(huì)作者在景物描寫中隱含的思想。五、總結(jié)存儲(chǔ)1.教師總結(jié)作者虛構(gòu)一個(gè)旅游者兼講述者——“一滴水”,用它形成時(shí)空線索,串聯(lián)起麗江的自然風(fēng)光、歷史文化、民俗風(fēng)情,并著力表現(xiàn)景物背后的麗江的人文精神,來(lái)抒發(fā)作者對(duì)麗江古城與自然美妙融合的贊美之情,對(duì)麗江的醇美、和諧、沉靜的贊美之情,對(duì)傳統(tǒng)與現(xiàn)代文明和諧交融的贊美之情,對(duì)自然萬(wàn)物的熱愛(ài)和生命平等的意識(shí)。詩(shī)意的語(yǔ)言中,有強(qiáng)烈的抒情,有厚重的歷史感,有深邃的哲思。這“一滴水”折射出的,是阿來(lái)的思想、靈魂。2.布置作業(yè)(1)模仿本文的寫法,寫一篇不少于600字的隨筆,選擇一個(gè)恰當(dāng)?shù)囊暯?,跨越時(shí)空,全面多角度展現(xiàn)家鄉(xiāng)的自然風(fēng)光、歷史文化、風(fēng)土人情。(2)課外閱讀阿來(lái)的《大地的階梯》,體會(huì)融景物、歷史、感悟、思考于一體的游記風(fēng)格。

預(yù)設(shè) 示例1:“板塊背上馱著許多大陸,當(dāng)板塊向一個(gè)或另一個(gè)方向運(yùn)動(dòng)時(shí),大陸也隨之一起運(yùn)動(dòng)?!薄榜W”字形象地寫出了大陸漂移的樣子,使抽象的理論變得生動(dòng)、有趣、易懂。示例2:“位于南極中心部位的南極洲是全球的大冰箱。”運(yùn)用了打比方的說(shuō)明方法,形象地說(shuō)明了南極洲寒冷的程度和南極洲在地球生態(tài)環(huán)境中的重要位置。 示例3:“一立方英寸被壓扁的沙子比一立方英寸普通的沙子要重得多?!边\(yùn)用作比較的說(shuō)明方法,說(shuō)明同體積被壓扁的沙子比普通沙子重得多的特點(diǎn)?!驹O(shè)計(jì)意圖】本環(huán)節(jié)設(shè)計(jì)的三個(gè)層次的語(yǔ)言賞析,讓學(xué)生深入文本體會(huì)、學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)明精練、邏輯性強(qiáng)、幽默風(fēng)趣的特點(diǎn),提高學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言鑒賞能力,為今后的說(shuō)明文寫作夯實(shí)基礎(chǔ)。四、總結(jié)拓展,激發(fā)思維所選的兩篇課文就同一對(duì)象——恐龍從不同角度思考,從而發(fā)現(xiàn)新的論據(jù)或得出新的結(jié)論。文章給了我們一些有益的啟示:不同領(lǐng)域的科學(xué)發(fā)現(xiàn)可以互相啟發(fā),從而有新的發(fā)現(xiàn);要學(xué)會(huì)從不同角度思考問(wèn)題。選擇下面兩個(gè)探討任務(wù)之一課外完成。
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