
This section focuses on "learning about experiencing music Online". This virtual choir is a new form of music performance. Members from all over the world don't need to love to come to a place. Instead, they use the new technology to model the various parts and wonderful virtual harmony group of music in the family. Students need to understand the main meaning of each paragraph. Finding topic sentences is an important way to understand the general idea of a paragraph. After the topic sentence, it is usually the detail sentence that supports and explains the topic sentence. Some paragraphs have obvious subject sentences, for example, the first sentence of the second paragraph is the subject sentence of the paragraph, and the following sentenceStudents need to pay attention to the topic sentences and key sentences, and then pay attention to how the sentences after the meaning explain, explain and support the topic sentences or key sentences before.1.Guide students to learn about experiencing music online2.Guide students to scan and circle the information in the text.3.Guide students to find the numbers and dates to fill in the timeline.4.Guide students to learn more about music by completing the sentences with the correct forms of the words and phrases. And then make a mind map about the outline of the passage.1. Guide students to pay attention to reading strategies, such as prediction, self-questioning and scanning.2. Help students sort out the main meaning of each paragraph and understand the narrative characteristics of "timeline” in illustrative style.3. Lead students to understand the changes that have been caused by the Internet.

(4)Now we have heard a number of outstanding speeches ... 我們已經(jīng)聆聽(tīng)了許多精彩的發(fā)言……(5)Because we wanted the nations of the world, working together, to deal with ... 因?yàn)槲覀兿M澜绺鲊?guó)團(tuán)結(jié)起來(lái)去應(yīng)對(duì)……(6)And if we do not act ... 如果我們不采取行動(dòng)……(7)Now, I share the concerns that have been expressed ... 我也同意對(duì)于……表達(dá)的擔(dān)心(8)Let us show the world that by working together we can ... 讓我們告訴全世界,通過(guò)一起努力我們可以……(9)It is now time for us to ... 是時(shí)候我們……(10)And I have always wished that ... 我一直希望……(11)Thank you for letting me share this day with me.感謝你們和我共度這一天。實(shí)踐演練:假如你是高中生李華,你校將舉辦一次以“音樂(lè)”為主題的演講比賽,請(qǐng)你按照主題,寫(xiě)下你的演講稿。注意:詞數(shù)100左右。First of all, thank you for listening to my speech. My topic is: love music like love yourself.Music is like the air we need to maintain our normal lives around us. You can't imagine how terrible a world without music would be. Movies and TV shows have no music, only dry conversations and scenes; mobile phones only vibrations; streets only noisy crowds; cafes, western restaurants only depressed meals. What a terrible world it is!As a student, I hope we all can enjoy the fun brought by music in our spare time. Instead of just listening to music, we can even make our own music. Let's enjoy the fun of music!Thanks again for your attention!

2. Explore the significance of the establishment of Sarek National Park.Q1: Which event is the most important one in the park’s history?Ss: The establishment of Sarek national park in 1909 is the most important one.Q2: Is it worth making a place like Sarek a national park? Give your reasons.Ss: Yes. In this way, the place can be kept in its natural state and natural beauties and other rare and valuable resources can be preserved instead of being destroyed by endless exploitation driven by profits.Q3: How does the writer organize his introduction to the history of Sarek?Ss: The writer organizes his introduction in the sequence of time, using time indicators such as “used to”, “around 9,000 years ago”, “soon after”, “following the reindeer”, and “in 1909”.Q4: What is the feature of the language used to introduce the history of the park?Ss: The introduction to the park is to provide facts, using time indicators to organize the events. Sentences starts with “third person” and passive voice is used more often, feeling objective.【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】學(xué)生尋找和梳理公園歷史上的重要事件,體會(huì)人與自然的和諧關(guān)系,評(píng)鑒介紹性語(yǔ)言的特點(diǎn)。【核心素養(yǎng)提升點(diǎn)】發(fā)展自主提取、梳理文本信息能力,訓(xùn)練邏輯思維和高階思維。Activity 3: Highlighting the secret of the text

【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】 基于上述分析,學(xué)生總結(jié)新聞故事語(yǔ)篇類型的特征,即標(biāo)題的省略性、導(dǎo)語(yǔ)的概括性、數(shù)據(jù)的支撐性和引語(yǔ)的重要性。在此過(guò)程中,學(xué)生對(duì)新聞故事語(yǔ)篇類型有了更深層次的了解,對(duì)于學(xué)生閱讀和寫(xiě)作具有重要意義。Activity 7: Discussing to make a writing outline.本活動(dòng)為實(shí)現(xiàn)課時(shí)目標(biāo)3。1.Discuss and make an outline.Ask students to discuss in groups of four and make their own writing outline.To celebrate the 70th anniversary of the People’s Republic of China, our school newspaper starts a new column about “People of Achievement”. You plan to write a news story about one of the winners of the Medal of the Republic in 2019, including Yu Min, Shen Jilan, Sun Jiadong, Li Yannian, Zhang Fuqing, Yuan Longping, Huang Xuhua and Tu Youyou.【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】 教師創(chuàng)設(shè)情境,即為慶祝新中國(guó)成立70周年,校報(bào)新增有關(guān)卓有成就人物的欄目,你將從共和國(guó)勛章獲得者中,選擇一位寫(xiě)一篇新聞故事,向該欄目投稿。學(xué)生以小組合作形式,展開(kāi)討論,并寫(xiě)出新聞故事框架,有助于學(xué)生課后收集人物信息,撰寫(xiě)新聞故事。

本閱讀材料的話題是交際中的肢體語(yǔ)言,作者從三個(gè)方面講述了肢體語(yǔ)言的特征與作用,通過(guò)主題句和舉例闡述的方式讓讀者了解不同文化中肢體語(yǔ)言的相同或者不同的意義,并從更抽象、概括的維度深入認(rèn)識(shí)肢體語(yǔ)言的特點(diǎn),理解肢體語(yǔ)言的作用。基于肢體語(yǔ)言的特點(diǎn),作者提醒讀者在與人交流中,尤其是當(dāng)文化背景有差異的時(shí)候,要使用得體的肢體語(yǔ)言,尊重、理解和包容不同的文化,進(jìn)行有效、有素養(yǎng)的溝通。文本共由六個(gè)段落組成,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)為“總—分”。第一段用簡(jiǎn)練的語(yǔ)言引出了話題,并且從我們自身表達(dá)的需要和了解他人感受兩個(gè)角度講述了肢體語(yǔ)言的作用。第二段闡述了肢體語(yǔ)言的第一個(gè)重要特點(diǎn)——肢體語(yǔ)言在不同的文化中有不同的內(nèi)涵——這也是文中寫(xiě)作篇幅最大的一個(gè)要點(diǎn),最為重要。通過(guò)講述肢體語(yǔ)言的這一特點(diǎn),作者向讀者傳遞了要尊重不同的文化、要使用與所在文化相宜的肢體語(yǔ)言。

1. 完成文本主要信息填空(斜體字部分設(shè)空):As a witness to farmers’ poor harvests and even a severe shortage of food, Yuan Longping was determined to devote his life to tackling this crisis. After graduation, he realized that what farmers needed most was to boost yields in the fields. Yuan was convinced that the answer lay in the creation of hybrid rice, one characteristic of which is that it usually achieve higher output than conventional crops. However, it was no easy job. The first difficulty he needed to overcome was scientists’ general assumption that this could not be done. Through trial and error, Yuan managed to generate this incredible crop. It is estimated that about 60 percent of domestic rice consumption in China was comprised of crops generated from Yuan’s hybrid strains. His innovation has enabled Chinese farmers to considerably expand their output and helped feed the world. Unwilling to retire early to a life of leisure and unconcerned about celebrity or fortune, Yuan continues to turn one vision after another into realities.2. 模仿寫(xiě)作:Do some research via the Internet and introduce another agricultural scientist, Chen Risheng(陳日勝), using the structure, expressions and writing techniques you have learnt from the text “A Pioneer for All People”.【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】任務(wù)1是對(duì)文本內(nèi)容和詞匯學(xué)習(xí)成效的檢測(cè)。任務(wù)2借助文本中學(xué)到的詞匯和寫(xiě)作手法仿寫(xiě)另一位科學(xué)家,提升學(xué)生遷移運(yùn)用詞匯、文體結(jié)構(gòu)和寫(xiě)作方法的能力。

本活動(dòng)旨在落實(shí)課時(shí)教學(xué)目標(biāo)2。 1.Think, discuss and share. Students form groups of 4, discuss about the given ending make comments. Q1: Do you like the ending? Q2: Was it a logical ending? Why so or why not? [設(shè)計(jì)意圖]通過(guò)引導(dǎo)學(xué)生思考、討論、評(píng)價(jià),比較個(gè)人、同伴所預(yù)測(cè)的結(jié)局和聽(tīng)力文本所給定的結(jié)局的異同點(diǎn),深化對(duì)文本的認(rèn)知,發(fā)展學(xué)生的評(píng)判性思維能力。 Activity 4: Exploring Asimov’s three laws of robotics and the purpose of the writing 本活動(dòng)旨在落實(shí)課時(shí)教學(xué)目標(biāo)3。 1. Get to know Isaac Asimov’s three laws of robotics. The teacher shares Isaac Asimov’s three laws of robotics. The three laws state that: ①A robot may not injure a human being or, through inaction, allow a human being to come to harm. ②A robot must obey any orders given to it by human beings, except where such orders would conflict with the First Law. ③A robot must protect its own existence as long as such protection does not conflict with the First or Second Law. Q: How does Tony’s story relate to the laws? 2. Figure out Isaac Asimov’s purpose of writing Satisfaction Guaranteed. The students express their opinions about the author’s writing purpose. Q: Why did Isaac Asimov write such a story? S: To explore the relationship between robots and humans. [設(shè)計(jì)意圖]通過(guò)了解艾薩克·阿西莫夫所制定的機(jī)器人三大定律,加深學(xué)生對(duì)文本的理解,深入探究文本的主題意義。推理作者的寫(xiě)作目的,聯(lián)系生活實(shí)際,思考人類與機(jī)器人的關(guān)系。

Activity 4: Figuring out the structure and the writing purpose 本活動(dòng)為實(shí)現(xiàn)課時(shí)目標(biāo)2。 1.Read Paragraph 6 and think about its main idea and the writer’s writing purpose. Q1: If you were the author, how would you end your article? “For young people, there is plenty of time to change bad habits. However, there is no “magic pill” or delete button that will help you; you have to think about your bad habits and decide on some changes. You have the power to build a happy and healthy life full of good habits!” Q2: What is Paragraph 6 mainly about? (Possible answer: to appeal to young people including teenagers to change bad habits and live a happy and healthy life.) 2.Think about the writer’s writing purpose and share opinions. Q1: What is the writing purpose? Work in pairs and figure it out. (Possible answer: On the one hand, the passage is written to help teenagers change their bad habits and live a healthy lifestyle. On the other hand, it provides us with a scientific way to identify and analyse our problems objectively, thus strengthening our resolve to tackle the seemingly common yet tough problems in our lives.) 【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】 步驟1旨在預(yù)測(cè)和驗(yàn)證文章最后一段主要內(nèi)容,梳理完整的語(yǔ)篇結(jié)構(gòu),步驟2旨在思考和討論作者的寫(xiě)作目的。教師也可根據(jù)學(xué)生課堂反應(yīng)情況融入對(duì)語(yǔ)篇人稱多次轉(zhuǎn)換的思考。

本活動(dòng)旨在落實(shí)課時(shí)目標(biāo)3。 The Student Union is looking for three students for a 3-week voluntary program in Guizhou province. The volunteers have got to be high school students, with a persevering personality and experiences in overcoming adversity. The volunteers need to stay, eat and teach with 20 pupils in a small school up on the hill of a village. There are no facilities but desks and a blackboard in the school. And there is no take-away food to be bought anywhere; the only way to feed yourself is to cook. You’re interested in applying. Write your application letter introducing what adversity you have ever overcome and how persevering you are as well as what you want to do when at work. Dear Student Union,【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】此任務(wù)旨在遷移一、二課時(shí)所學(xué),解決實(shí)際問(wèn)題。學(xué)生對(duì)比自己經(jīng)歷過(guò)的挑戰(zhàn)或挫折,寫(xiě)信給學(xué)生會(huì)申請(qǐng)前往貴州擔(dān)任短期支教教師,把個(gè)人以前是怎么戰(zhàn)勝挫折的經(jīng)過(guò)書(shū)寫(xiě)出來(lái)。結(jié)合所學(xué),遷移創(chuàng)新,分析解決自身實(shí)際問(wèn)題,在真實(shí)情境中學(xué)生通過(guò)仿寫(xiě)進(jìn)行主題語(yǔ)言的精確輸出。完成任務(wù)的過(guò)程中,能較多地使用已學(xué)語(yǔ)言、內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)和寫(xiě)作手法來(lái)描述自己面對(duì)挫折的處理方式、態(tài)度和應(yīng)有的品質(zhì),近一步激發(fā)學(xué)生樹(shù)立正確的價(jià)值觀,學(xué)會(huì)逆境出人才,堅(jiān)忍不拔,從容不迫,又做到謙讓、分享和合作。課后學(xué)生修正習(xí)作,再次提交。

本單元閱讀文本介紹了幾種簡(jiǎn)單的英語(yǔ)詩(shī)歌形式,旨在讓學(xué)生能理解和欣賞英語(yǔ)詩(shī)歌的美,包括形式美、內(nèi)容美、意義美,培養(yǎng)審美情趣,并從作品的意義美中獲得積極的人生態(tài)度和價(jià)值觀念啟示。 該文本是一則典型的說(shuō)明性文本,用簡(jiǎn)單易懂的語(yǔ)言向英語(yǔ)詩(shī)歌的初學(xué)者們介紹了五種比較簡(jiǎn)單的英語(yǔ)詩(shī)歌形式。文題“A Few Simple Forms of English Poems”是整個(gè)文本的核心話題。正文內(nèi)容共七段,按“總—分—總”建構(gòu)。第一段為總起段,概述了英語(yǔ)詩(shī)歌的創(chuàng)作原因以及主要特點(diǎn),涉及了形式、內(nèi)容、意義等方面賞析英語(yǔ)詩(shī)歌的幾個(gè)主要維度;第二段至第六段分別介紹了童謠、清單詩(shī)、五行詩(shī)、俳句和唐詩(shī)五種英語(yǔ)詩(shī)歌形式;第七段收尾,鼓勵(lì)讀者嘗試英語(yǔ)詩(shī)歌創(chuàng)作。 在進(jìn)行文本教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)時(shí),要引導(dǎo)學(xué)生梳理關(guān)于與詩(shī)歌要素和詩(shī)歌賞析有關(guān)的話題類語(yǔ)言,既包括format、rhythm、subject、image等名詞,也包括have a strong rhythm、be made up of、contain、consist of、convey這樣的動(dòng)詞和動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)。

本活動(dòng)旨在落實(shí)課時(shí)目標(biāo)3。 Think about the following questions and talk about your own attitude in pairs.Q1: As for this topic,what impresses you the most in the passage?Q2: What do you think of the future of China’s further exploration in sea? Are you in favor of the further exploration?Why or why not? 【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】該活動(dòng)是一個(gè)完全開(kāi)放性的活動(dòng),每個(gè)學(xué)生都會(huì)有不同的答案。運(yùn)用遷移所學(xué),自由口頭表達(dá)自己對(duì)海洋探索的態(tài)度。對(duì)于中國(guó)海洋探索的未來(lái),每個(gè)人的想法是不一樣的,有樂(lè)觀,有擔(dān)憂,有認(rèn)為值得投入,也有認(rèn)為不值得付出太大代價(jià),這里給學(xué)生自由表達(dá)的空間只要學(xué)會(huì)有支撐自己觀點(diǎn)的事實(shí)就可以了,進(jìn)一步培養(yǎng)學(xué)生批判性思維和正確的價(jià)值觀。 Assignment: 此任務(wù)旨在遷移一、二課時(shí)所學(xué),培養(yǎng)學(xué)生辯證分析問(wèn)題的能力。 Write about your idea of the future of China’s sea exploration. And add your attitude towards the effort China have made in sea exploration. You’re expected to use the language and the writing technique learnt in the passage.

本單元閱讀文本向中學(xué)生推薦職業(yè)能力測(cè)試(Career Aptitude Test),旨在建議學(xué)生利用職業(yè)傾向測(cè)試來(lái)發(fā)現(xiàn)自己更感興趣、更有潛力的學(xué)習(xí)或職業(yè)方向,并規(guī)劃自己的未來(lái)職業(yè)。 本文采用了建議性文本,全篇從職業(yè)生涯的重要意義講起,針對(duì)中學(xué)生對(duì)職業(yè)規(guī)劃比較迷茫的現(xiàn)狀,提出了職業(yè)傾向測(cè)試這一建議。全文共七段,其中第一段和第二段為第一部分,其余五段為第二部分。第一部分論述職業(yè)的重要性和職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃的最佳時(shí)間是在校期間,第二部分提出解決職業(yè)選擇困惑可以通過(guò)完成職業(yè)能力測(cè)試,介紹了不同種類的職業(yè)傾向測(cè)試,結(jié)合圖表詳細(xì)說(shuō)明其中一種操作步驟,并提醒職業(yè)建議也基于學(xué)歷和經(jīng)驗(yàn),最后一段概括論述,建議學(xué)生通過(guò)職業(yè)能力測(cè)試這一有效的工具,找到自己真正熱愛(ài)的事物。 在文本教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)時(shí),要幫助學(xué)生梳理有關(guān)職業(yè)的話題語(yǔ)言。閱讀策略層面,指導(dǎo)學(xué)生通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)圖表和圖形,在有限的空間內(nèi)獲取廣泛信息,如閱讀圖表標(biāo)題,圖表上的標(biāo)簽,X軸Y軸上的數(shù)據(jù)所指。

【教材分析】This teaching period mainly deals with reading for writing a letter of advice. Students are expected to learn the knowledge about how to write a suggestion letter. The teacher is expected to enable students to master some writing skills concerning suggestion letters and learn to write one.【教學(xué)目標(biāo)與核心素養(yǎng)】1. Get students to have a good understanding of how to write a suggestion letter properly.2. Enable students to use some writing skills flexibly.3. Develop students’ writing and cooperating abilities.4. Strengthen students’ great interest in writing discourses.【教學(xué)重難點(diǎn)】1. How to enable students to have a good understanding of the skills of writing a suggestion letter2.How to enable students to write a good recommendation letter using some writing skills properly.【教學(xué)過(guò)程】Step 1: Lead in Begin the class with the lead-in questions: how to write a letter for advice? What kinds of aspects should be included? It is strongly recommended that the teacher should ask students to discuss the topic freely with their partners and brainstorm some ideas concerning the topic. In this way, students can come up with more ideas and avoid being nervous at the beginning of the class.Step 2: Read to discover details concerning advice letters’ writing style.The teacher is expected to ask students to read a letter offering some advice on page 18 silently and then request students to discuss the questions below.

5. Read to get detailed information about Paragraph 5.Q1. What shows the revival of Tangshan?Q2. How can Tangshan revive itself and get up on its feet again?Q3. In times of disasters, how can we go through it?T: In times of disasters, we should unify, show the wisdom and stay positive.Step 4 Activity 4 Highlighting the theme and reflecting1. Make a summary of the text.2. Further understand the titleQ: After our learning, why do you think the earth didn’t sleep on that night?T: An earthquake happened. The people in the earthquake suffered a lot, and the people outside Tangshan were concerned about the people there a lot.3. Reflect through discussion on what can be learnt after reading.T: Disasters are powerful. Unpreparedness can be deadly. Life is weak, but if people work together to help each other, disasters can be defeated.There is no love from disaster, but we have love in the human heart.Step 5 Assignment How does the writer convey that the earthquake was deadly, and that people were helpless during the earthquake? Try to find some attractive and impressive expressions and note them down.

This teaching period mainly deals with grammar “restrictive relative clauses.” To begin with, teachers should lead students to revise what they have learned about the relative pronouns and relative adverbs. And then, teachers move on to stress more special cases concerning this grammar, such as the “preposition+ relative pronouns which and whom” and cases where we can omit the relative pronouns. This period carries considerable significance to the cultivation of students’ writing competence and lays a solid foundation for the basic appreciation of language beauty. The teacher is expected to enable students to master this period thoroughly and consolidate the knowledge by doing some exercises. 1. Guide students to review the basic usages of relative pronouns and adverbs of attributive clauses.2. Lead students to learn to use some special cases concerning restrictive relative clauses flexibly.2. Enable students to use the basic phrases structures flexibly.3. Strengthen students’ great interest in grammar learning.1. Help students to appreciate the function of relative pronouns and adverbs of attributive clauses in a sentence2. Instruct students to write essays using the proper relative pronouns and adverbs of attributive clauses.本節(jié)語(yǔ)法思考:定語(yǔ)從句在復(fù)合句中的作用是什么? 關(guān)系詞有哪些?定語(yǔ)從句在復(fù)合句中的作用相當(dāng)于形容詞,它在句中作定語(yǔ)修飾名詞或代詞。他們?cè)谙刃性~和定語(yǔ)從句之間起到聯(lián)系作用,同時(shí)在意義上代表先行詞并在定語(yǔ)從句中擔(dān)任一個(gè)成分。被定語(yǔ)從句所修飾的詞稱先行詞,定語(yǔ)從句一般放在先行詞的后面。

The activity topic of this section is "report an ongoing event", and the structure is the passive voice of present continuous tense. Rare wild animals are suffering from large-scale poaching, and species are on the brink of danger. Rescue operations are underway. "Being" and "suffering" are the meanings of the present progressive passive voice.The usage of present progressive passive voice is of great importance in writing a good discourse and appreciating some difficult language items, so it is vital to master it and use it flexibly in a context.1. Motivate Ss to deepen the understanding of the usage of present progressive passive voice in a fixed context.2. Enable Ss to master the usage of present progressive passive voice and use it flexibly in a context.3. Lead Ss to construct sentences or appreciate sentences used master it and use it flexibly in a context.1. Help students to appreciate the function of the usage of present progressive passive voice in a sentence2. Instruct students to write essays using the proper usage of present progressive passive voice.Look at the picture and tell me what are workers doing? What is the house being done?

This unit is about the Internet, which has a great influence to our humans and our lives. During the Listening & Speaking & Talking and Reading and Thinking section, the influence in examples has been shown. Thus, use the Present Perfect Tense is appropriate. However, in order to show the justice or weaken the doer of the behavior/action, it’s better to use the Present Perfect Passive Voice than the Present Perfect Tense. Besides, having learned to use the Present Perfect Passive Voice, students can beautify their language in their writing. 1. Learn the structure of the Present Perfect Passive Voice and its functions. 2. Learn to change the sentences with the Present Perfect Passive Voice into the sentences with the Present Perfect Passive Voice. 3. Learn to write sentences with the Present Perfect Passive Voice flexibly according to the context. 1. Learn the structure of the Present Perfect Passive Voice and its functions. 2. Learn to change the sentences with the Present Perfect Passive Voice into the sentences with the Present Perfect Passive Voice. 3. Learn to write sentences with the Present Perfect Passive Voice flexibly according to the context. Step 1 Observe the following sentences, then change the sentences into passive voice.He has been selected to take part in the sports meeting.(肯定句)他已被挑選出來(lái)參加運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)。The ink has not been removed from his overcoat.(否定句)墨跡還沒(méi)有從他外套上去掉。

8. However, the more polite you are, the less likely it is you will be attacked. 然而, 你越有禮貌, 你被攻擊的可能性就越小。 Step 8 Writing---the articleHow to stay safe in the online chat roomToday I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times--- how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences in the online chat room ? I’m not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two.First of all, there’s the golden rule of the Internet: keep out of what makes you uneasy. Don’t post comments or click on anything. Second, protect your privacy. Don’t give out too much private information like your address, phone numbers, the ID numbers, etc. Third, be polite. If you are polite to others on the Internet, you won’t be attacked in normal situation. Finally, don’t believe in others easily and never meet someone you met online alone. It is very dangerous.Have you had any bad experiences online, or do you have some good advice for staying safe? Post your comments below!Step 9 Pair workExchange drafts with a partner. Use this checklist to help your partner revise his/her draft.1. Does the writer tell the reader what he/she know about the topic ?2. Are the tips and suggestions well organised ?3. Has the writer defined the new words ?4. Does the author include examples, comparison, or explanations ?5. Does the writer end by asking readers to leave comments and/or suggestions ?6. Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes.Step 6 HomeworkPut up your revised draft in the classroom or read it to your class.

這個(gè)地區(qū)有著深厚的傳統(tǒng)。既學(xué)既練:為了讓更多的外國(guó)游客了解中國(guó)文化,欣賞中國(guó)美麗的自然風(fēng)光,感受中國(guó)發(fā)生的巨大變化,某外文雜志社將出版一本英語(yǔ)小冊(cè)子來(lái)介紹中國(guó)的旅游景點(diǎn)。該雜志社邀請(qǐng)你為該小冊(cè)子寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文來(lái)介紹杭州,內(nèi)容包括:1.杭州的位置(中國(guó)東南部)、面積(16 000多平方公里)及歷史(2 200多年)等;2.杭州的旅游特色(自然風(fēng)景、傳統(tǒng)文化、特色小吃等);3.希望更多的游客來(lái)杭州參觀。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。Located in the southeast of China, Hangzhou is a beautiful city.Dating back more than 2,200 years, Hangzhou covers an area of more than 16,000 square kilometers.In Hangzhou, you can visit the West Lake, whose scenery is fascinating.In addition, you can’t miss its cultural relics and historical sites, from which you will learn more about excellent Chinese traditional culture and traditions.In Hangzhou, the special snacks are famous and visitors from different parts of the world think highly of them.As a tourist attraction, Hangzhou attracts a large number of visitors from home and abroad every year.Once you come to China, Hangzhou is a scenic spot you can’t miss.

The Internet celebrity Gao Yifeng. Years ago, he owned 5 companies and the staffs over 1,000, but during the economy crisis, he became nothing but debt. He was so worried that his hair became white overnight. There was a time when he wanted to killed himself. But after listening to the song Start Over by Liu Huan, he decided to cheer himself up. He started a steamed bun shop and gradually became a national chain shops. Now he became successful again.Walter Haddon said, “Music is the medicine of a troubled mind.” Music contains such a pleasant and inspiring force. Music gave him courage and bravery. When he listened to the song, it made his spirit fly like a kite in the wind. Music gave him strength and brought him relief. It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times. I hope none of us have to go through the same kind of suffering that he did. At the same time, we all go through various periods when we feel sad or alone. During those times, music can help us in the same way that it helped him. I hope we all will somehow begin to treasure music and make it a part of our life. Thank you for your listening !5.Revise your writing each other.Does he/she explain how music has changed his/her/someone else’s life?Are some of the rhetorical devices included and used properly ?Does he/she talk about how music makes him/her/someone feel?Is the first word in each sentences capitalised?Does he/she use correct punctuation ?
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